Great movement, use of complimentary color scheme, grey placement and rule of thirds. I think you might need a period or comma after mind. When I say the ad copy out loud I naturally say Empty your mind (pause) Fill your canvas. If there is a pause there then you need space or punctuation. Great design.
I agree on the comma thing. Just a suggestion: If you wanted, you could move "fill" down and center "mind,", have "fill your" next to each other, and below that center "canvas".
Great movement, use of complimentary color scheme, grey placement and rule of thirds. I think you might need a period or comma after mind. When I say the ad copy out loud I naturally say Empty your mind (pause) Fill your canvas. If there is a pause there then you need space or punctuation. Great design.
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ReplyDeleteI agree on the comma thing. Just a suggestion: If you wanted, you could move "fill" down and center "mind,", have "fill your" next to each other, and below that center "canvas".
yep i agree ^^^
ReplyDeleteother than that this looks great :)
you need to put a comma after mind. ! just saying gurl. good grammar is the best grammar. ugh i sound like an english teacher
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